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下面是小编为大家整理的初中英语作文评分标准满分20【22篇】，欢迎大家借鉴与参考，希望对大家有所帮助。
第一篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
I am Alice. I am a student of No.1 Middle School. I study in Class Two Grade Seven.
There is a map of our school on the wall. The playground is in the middle of the school. On the left of the playground, there is a library. I like reading very much, so I often read books in the library. There is a teaching building behind the library. We study in that building. My classroom is on the second floor in that building. The teachers" offices are in that building, too. Where is the sport hall? Oh, it"s on the right of the teaching building. I have P.E class in the sport hall. The canteen is in front of the sport hall. We have lunch and dinner in the canteen. In the school, I feel very happy!
This is my school. It"s a big and nice place. I like my school very much. What about your school?
第二篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
As a middle school student, I learn many subjects, I study so hard everyday. When I get home, I will do my homework and then go over the book. But whenholiday comes, I feel a little confused, because I don’t want to study and dosomething new. Then I don’t know what to do, my mind get blank. I decide todevelop my interest. Some day, I happened to see a tennis match and I couldn’tstop watching, then I fell in love with tennis. So I started to learn playingtennis, I felt so happy. Now tennis is my favorite sport, I find a way to relaxmyself.
第三篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
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Since I came to middle school, I have to learn so many subjects, at first,I could not catch up with my classmates, I felt so worried. So I decided to keepstudying every night. After finishing dinner, I went to my bedroom and did myhomework. But when I finished my homework, I forced myself to go over othersubjects. Though I was very tired, I still keptstudying until midnight. But itdid not work, I did not made progress. I talked to my teacher, she told me torelax and had a good rest, I needed to be patient and made progress step bystep. I realized my mistake and adjusted my method and it works.
第四篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
What do you think the life in the future will be like?
Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us know a lot all over the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework. They can help us do some cleaning, cooking or washing. We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Students can study at home on computers. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care.
Our life will be better and better. For this, we should study hard. I believe we’ll be able to do this.
第五篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
Everyone has their own dreams.Dream is the start of success.When we have a dream,the only thing we should to do is make it come ture.
I have a dream.My dream is to be a computer programmer,who can create software or computer games.I like computer.When the first time I met computer,it attracted me immediately.Of course,to be a good programmer is difficult,but I think I can make it.
Now everything I do is close to my dream.I feel my life is fill with hope and is colorful,and I have enough confidence to realize my dream.I’ll work hard for my dreams,I will never give up.
第六篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
When I come to the middle school, I feel so excited, because I want tolearn more knowledge and prepare for my future. Some of my friends are afraid ofthe coming challenges, they think they can’t handle, but for me, life will bewonderful with all kinds of challenges. It is the challenges that makes mestronger. If everything comes to me without hard working, then I won’t cherishit. I am so eager to meet the coming difficulties, I won’t give up no matter howhard they will be. Some day when I look back on these days, I will not beregretful of what I have done.
第七篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
The walls are white and blue. The curtains are blue too. There is a big window on the wall, so my bedroom is also very bright. There are some photos on the wall. They’re very beautiful.
In the middle of the room, there is my bed. It’s not so big, but it’s very comfortable. Every night, I lay on the bed and have a good dream.
On the right of the bed, there is my desk and chair. They’re in front of the window. My computer is on the desk. There is a lamp on the desk, too. I can do my homework here and play computer games.
My bookshelf is on the left of the bed. There are a lot of storybooks and picture books in the shelf. I like them very much.
Not everyone has a bedroom. I’m very lucky, because I have a very beautiful bedroom. I’ll try my best to keep it clean and tidy.
第八篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s agreat shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.
第九篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend thetime with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy.Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the daysbecome longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it issinging, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear somebirds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to thenature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorfulflower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.
第十篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
do you know a teacher in my eyes? and do you want to know ?i don"t want to tell him to common persons ,but if you really want to know , i will tell you .all teachers in my eyes are giant ,but ***× in my eyes is the best one .
he has taught me english for 2 years, so i get to know him ,he looks like happy every day .sometimes he is my good pal ,we always play games together.
he often told us to study hard and not to make our parents lost, and he often helps many people, so i think he is kind.
he is the best teacher in my eyes for sure .he makes me happy every day and makes me learn a lot of knowledge. i thank him very much.
第十一篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
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Since I came to middle school, I have to learn so many subjects, at first, I could not catch up with my classmates, I felt so worried. So I decided to keep studying every night. After finishing dinner, I went to my bedroom and did my homework. But when I finished my homework, I forced myself to go over other subjects. Though I was very tired, I still keptstudying until midnight. But it did not work, I did not made progress. I talked to my teacher, she told me to relax and had a good rest, I needed to be patient and made progress step by step. I realized my mistake and adjusted my method and it works.
第十二篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
When I was in primary school, my mother sent me to learn ballet, like othermothers, she hoped me to act like a princess, but I was not interested indancing, so I quit the class. Later my mother tried to send me to learn singing,but I had no talent in it. When my mother’s friends were talking, they were soproud of their children, because they had the talent in dancing and singing. Ifelt a little loss, I must find my own talent and learn some skills. I found Iwas very interested in painting, now I have learned it for four years, myteacher speak highly of me.
第十三篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
英语作文写作技巧
(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
第十四篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
I am a shy girl, when my teachers ask me the questions, I will always lowdown my head and answer them with small voice. Because of my character, I missthe chances to make myself stand out and I also don’t have many friends. Ireally want to change my situation, I don’t want to be a stand by anymore, Iwant to be part of the group. So I force myself to join the class activities, Ifind I enjoy them and I talk to my classmate a lot. I become active and start totry more things, I take part in the debate competition and show my ability, Ifind my stage.
第十五篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places， such as in the library， in the class. We shouldn"t leave rubbish here and there. Don"t draw pictures on the wall， they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school， I"m sure our school will be more beautiful.
第十六篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
Since I came to middle school, I have to learn so many subjects, at first, I could not catch up with my classmates, I felt so worried. So I decided to keep studying every night. After finishing dinner, I went to my bedroom and did my homework. But when I finished my homework, I forced myself to go over other subjects. Though I was very tired, I still keptstudying until midnight. But it did not work, I did not made progress. I talked to my teacher, she told me to relax and had a good rest, I needed to be patient and made progress step by step. I realized my mistake and adjusted my method and it works.
第十七篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy.It is not good to spit in public places，such as in the library，in the class.We shouldn"t leave rubbish here and there. Don"t draw pictures on the wall，theyinfluence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy.And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do somethinguseful for our school，I"m sure our school will be more beautiful.
第十八篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
I Love My Family
I have a happy family.Although my parents are very busy,they try their best to take good care of me.I think I should do something for them.
Yesterday was Sunday.I got up earily than usual.After washing,I swept the floor,watered the plants and then I went to the kitchen to prepare breakfast.At around 9 o’clock,breakfast was ready.Mum and dad got up.When they saw it,they were very happy,”Dear,thank you for your delicious breakfast.”
Hearing that,I was so happy and felt as if I had grown up.Mum and dad have done a lot for me.I should do whatever I can for my family though I am very busy learning.The more I do for it,the happier my family will be.
第十九篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
初中英语满分作文
Planting Trees
It was fine on March 12 ， . I got up early that day . All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees .
We arrived at the hill at eight o"clock . The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees . Then we started digging ， planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of tim e . Among us ， Wang Lin ， our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill ， he worked harder . When he finished his task ， he went on to help others without even a little rest . He was wet all over after work .“ I must learn from him ，” I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees ， we smiled happily ， forgetting our tiredness .
这是罚款， 3月12日。我得到了早期那一天。所有的学生在我们学校到山上植树。
我们来到位于山8时。老师问我们每个人的植物，至少有6棵树木。然后我们开始挖掘，种植和浇水。我们所有辛勤工作，我们可以完成我们面前的任务添室在我们中间，王林，我们的监察树立一个好榜样，为我们。虽然他生病，他的工作更难。当他完成他的任务，他曾帮助别人，甚至没有一点休息。他是湿的所有超过下班后， “我要学习他， ”我对自己说。看线条的幼树，我们愉快地微笑着，忘记了我们的疲倦
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A Trip
I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way. One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn"t move any further. Nobody knew what to do. One girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area. Luckily we brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him rest in it. He took some medicine. Then he drank some water, and ate some food. After a while, he felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain.
。我去远足到山区与我的朋友去年夏天。这是一个很好的访问在开始，但意想不到的发生在中途。我的一位朋友突然感觉到一种可怕的痛苦，在他的胃部和他不能提出任何进一步。没有人知道怎样做。一个女孩试图叫她妈妈与她的移动电话，但没有信号的山区。幸好我们带来了一个帐篷，与我们。我们把它起来，让他在休息。他采取了一些中药。然后他喝了一些水，吃了一些食物。过了一段时间，他觉得好得多，我们走上了。我们都享有对自己上方的山区。
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我爱我的家Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city D Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.
There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.
Thank you.
A few years ago, my family had only one small room. It was very hard for three people to live in the same room. Now we have moved into a new flat with one living room and two bedrooms. I"m very happy. I can do my homework quietly in my own room when my parents do the housework or other things. I love my home.
几年前，我的家庭只有一个小房间。这是很难有3人生活在同一个房间。现在我们已搬进了新的单位，一间起居室和两间卧室。我很高兴。我可以做我的.功课，悄悄地在我自己的房间时，我的父母做家务或其他东西。我爱我的家。
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关于指路的
Yesterday evening ， I went out for a walk with my mother . On the road ， we met a foreigner . He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel . I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left ， then he could see the hotel . He thanked me very much for my help . I was happy thatI could help him
昨日傍晚，我走出去，为散步，与我的母亲。在道路上，我们遇到一位外国人。他问我的方式向温泉大酒店。我告诉他，走公路沿线和采取的第三个转折就在左边的话，他可以看到酒店。他感谢我很为我的帮助。我很高兴thati可以帮助他
第二十篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
1、选择生动准确的词
词是语言的基本单位，人们要表达思想，就要选择适当的词语，这是写作的基本要求。
词可分为一般概念的词(general words)和具体概念的词(specific words)。表示一般概念的词含义模糊;表示具体概念的词含义明确，表达准确，生动形象。写作时合理地使用具体概念的词能够使句子表达的意思准确，内容生动，更富有感染力。试比较下面各组句子：
(l) A few houses were destroyed yesterday (general)
Five houses burnt down yesterday (specific)
(2)His relatives gave him two gifts(general)
His aunt and uncle gave hima watch and a Pen as the birthday gifts。(specific)
(3) Jack went to the window and looked at the crowd outside(general)
Jack tiptoed to the window and peeped into the room(specific)
上面各组句中，第一个句子抽象概括，给人以空泛的感觉：第二个句子用词具体，有个件，使人感到意思确切，生动逼真。
2、使用英语成语和习语
人们在长期使用语言的过程中，积累了大量的习惯表达法。这些成语、习语内涵丰富，语言生动活泼。文章中适当地使用这类短语，可避免语言的单调贫乏，使句子生动而富于内涵。如：
(l)George has lost his social position since his business failed.
可改为：George has come down in the world since his business failed
(2).Maybe you have time to go to the cinema,but I have more importavt businessto attend to.
第二十一篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
How to keep healthy /fit?
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during thenight. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for ourhealth. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruitand vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water.
We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise tobuild up our bodies. Finally, we should be happy everyday.
Because smile will make us younger. That is my advice. I hope you arehealthy and enjoy your life.
第二十二篇: 初中英语作文评分标准满分20
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when Iwas ten years old.
But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So Ihave been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes,watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, thereare some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singingEnglish songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal fromEnglish-speaking countries.
I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
